I just read the script, Begin With Hope sounds like a really nice program. I can see the dialog but so far I don't know if this is only good by making it as a full 2D animation. That is because of the serious tone of the overall script.
I suggest we add more things to this video, such as live footage as well as more action to the script. Maybe a call to action or something? I don't know. It seems that, even thought the message is good, it needs a much direct approach, because it's a serious topic.
So, the script is as follows: The first part clearly does facts, which is nice, but then we make a rough cut to "what Begin with hope" is, so there's no "how this impacts your life, your family or your social life". So it sounds like I'm having a personal issue, rather than how it affects people around me, which is kind of a big deal. That can broaden up your audience.