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Dreamchas8r
The conspiracy
This story tells about the events and conspiracy that was happening in the background from the making of Knights Templars till their fall, and what is happening now.
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Hello.
Thank you for your entry.
The story have some interesting points, but I especially don't like how its constructed the narration.- 1 év telt el
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Dreamchas8r
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Thanks for your feedback. I too feel that the narration has gone bland. Anyways, if you want to use it, let me know, I'll rewrite it.
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