As a small business owner, I am on both ends of the spectrum for this particular project. I write proposals seeking sponsors to split costs of larger events I host and co-host, and I am constantly receiving sponsorship requests, so I know which ones stand out in the crowd, and which ones get put in the back of the filing cabinet.
Since I am writing this proposal on my tablet, I am unable to download your previous application to give you initial feedback, but in reality, that is what you would be paying for regardless.
I have a keen ability at putting a positive spin on items that need highlighted and described, rather than left open to negative self assumptions by attempting to hide or omit. I also believe that you should have a couple different proposals, perhaps more, depending upon the demographic of the audience that you are seeking funding from. I believe I can accomplish this task and provide results you are satisfied with. One of my key attributes is open communication, sharing progress and drafts to make sure we are headed the same direction and ideals. Also, English is my native language, I studied English, Tech writing, business writing, and now, own my own business and freelance on the side. I assure you I will take your task very seriously and do the necessary research to make sure your documents convey the feel and spirit you desire. Do not hesitate to ask me any questions. I will look forward to hearing from you.